我喜欢网上购物

In the current society, with the rapid development of the Internet, shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters. 
在当今社会，随着互联网的飞速发展，网上购物已经成为一种时尚，尤其是青少年。
Online shopping has made our daily life become more convenient and feel comfortable. In the first place, shopping on the Internet can save much time so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic study. In the second place, the Internet has provided kinds of goods to consumers, and we can save much money through online shopping. 
网上购物让我们的生活变得更加方便和舒适。首先，在网上购物可以节省大量的时间，这样他们就有更多的精力和时间花在学习上了。第二，互联网为消费者提供了各种各样的商品，而且我们还可以节省很多钱。
However, every coin has two sides, online shopping also has shortcomings. We maybe buy some fake products online because of lacking of the face to face communication with sellers. What’s more, the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.
然而，每个硬币都有两面，网上购物也有其缺点。在网上我们可能会买到一些假的产品因为无法面对面与卖家沟通。更重要的是，物流也会增加商品损坏的风险。
Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former, because shopping on the internet has become more and more important to us in our daily life. We should follow the footsteps of the times.
权衡这两种观点，我更倾向于前者因为网上购物在我们日常生活中越来越重要了。我们应该要跟上时代的脚步。